i know the well of thanos jokes has run dry but this is such a fucking funny gif its probably the funniest punch ive ever seen. he just lays into him so hard and his ultra high tech suit does fuck all like its a bouncer just putting all his weight into hitting a drunk guy in the jaw i love this fucking gif so much i could write a dissertation about it
But don’t worry, most writers are and I’m here to help because reading them is making me cRAzY.
I’m writing this because I’ve read three otherwise great romance novels back to back featuring characters dealing with PTSD (or PTSD symptoms) and each one of them made the same dream mistakes. I honestly can’t think of a fiction book I’ve read that didn’t make these mistakes, so I thought I’d compile a handy dandy list of mistakes and how to fix them.
Lucky for you, I have PTSD and a ton of fellow veteran friends who deal with these symptoms.
*This is based on my experience and things told to me by friends. This is not to say that the below doesn’t happen in real life, only that it’s not as common as you might think.
The issue with these dreams is twofold: on one side is the psychological accuracy of the dream and on the other side is how you’re using the dream within the narrative.
Oh an Black Sails spoilers-ish ahead.
1) Stop writing the dream as a shot-by-shot accurate retelling of Traumatic Event.
Listen, not only do dreams seldom follow reality, but our own memories are tricky at best. I don’t remember getting beaten up because a) it was horrifying and we block stuff like that out and b) I was going in and out of consciousness. It would be pretty strange for me to dream something I don’t even fully remember. Our brains are simply not wired to do these vivid factually-accurate cinematic retellings.
My friend dreams things that did happen, but in his own words those dreams are always wrong in some noticeable or bizarre way. For instance, he’s getting chased through the streets of Iraq by a werewolf.
2) Dreams are informed by reality, not direct reflections of it.
It’s entirely likely my friend dreamt of a werewolf in Iraq because I got him binge watching Supernatural and the two ideas merged in his dreamstate. But see, that’s how dreams work.
The trauma event exists as a constant in his subconscious, but he has all this other information right there in his conscious mind all day, every day. In dreams, there isn’t a clear delineation between that information.
My dreams are often dependent on whatever I’ve fallen asleep watching on television. The themes are consistent, but not the content.
In Black Sails, Captain Flint’s trauma dreams feature his dead partner and friend following him around his empty ship. You have an element of the trauma (the animated corpse of his friend) + his daily existence (his ship). The two things intersect to form these unsettling nightmares as expressions of his fears and grief. He never once relives the event itself in his dreams as shown on screen.
Speaking of…
3) Trauma dreams often revolve around feelings, not necessarily the events themselves.
The PTSD package generally includes heaps of shame, guilt, anger and fear. As someone who survived a beating when I should have had control of the situation, my dreams tend to revolve around fear that people will know I’m a fraud or being unable to act in a dangerous situation.
Again, it’s entirely common for trauma victims to not remember large chunks (or the whole thing) of the trauma event. So why should their dreams be stunningly accurate? What we remember are feelings. Real strong feelings.
You cannot go wrong if you write your trauma dream around feelings, not a specific event.
4) If you present trauma dreams as expressions of themes, you can let go of the trauma dream as an exposition dump/way overused suspense trope.
You know you’ve read this: MC has dreams that are a shot-by-shot retelling of Traumatic Event that always cut off right before Traumatic Event, so that the Big Reveal must happen by a discovery later in the novel.
If I were the MC in a book, the easy and common thing would be to use the “dream sequence” as an expository retelling of Traumatic Event as a way to give some backstory to why I might be surly, mistrustful, afraid to try something new, whatever, and to clumsily shoehorn in suspense where there doesn’t need to be.
The much more interesting thing might be if my dreams were inconsistent in content but consistent in theme. In one I’m on an alien planet (because I fell asleep watching the Science Channel again) and the ground opens up and I fall into a pit from which I can’t escape because I am helpless. In another a man is watching me while I sleep where I am again frozen and helpless. This would force the reader to think: what is the recurring issue in these dreams? Why is it important? What is this telling me about this character and what happened to her?
It could be a personal preference, but I’d rather see the Traumatic Event either told in narrative flashbacks (not dreams) or verbally retold by the character in question. Let the dreams tell me something deeper about the character. It’s not that I was beat up, it’s that I feel like a failure because of it. One of these things is a shallow factual detail, the other tells you something about me as a person that I’m sharing with you, gentle reader, because talking about this stuff is healthy.
5) The Traumatic Event doesn’t have to be a big secret.
In Black Sails, we know what happened to Captain Flint’s partner. It happened in real time in the show. That didn’t make his uber disturbing dreams less disturbing or mysterious. Fans still debate exactly what the symbolism was and what they were telling us about James Flint in those moments. We do know from the dreams that he was disturbed, obsessed, and also monumentally guilty and blaming himself for what happened.
The mystery was perhaps more heightened by the fact that the dreams weren’t direct reflections of reality. We know who this person was, what she believed, and why she died. That Flint is imagining her screaming silently in his ear is horrifying and discordant with what we know to be factual. This adds emotional complexity to his character and the decisions he’s making while suffering these dreams.
^^^this didn’t happen. It was a dream. A real unsettling dream.
Once you let go of the concept of the trauma dream as a literal retelling and exposition dump, you have the entire dreamscape to work in other narrative elements, like symbolism, metaphor, foreshadowing, etc.
a good post. particularly that the traumatic event doesn’t have to be a secret. frankly i’m getting real tired of ptsd being used as a cheap plot device.
everyone knows my medical phobia comes from the surgery i had last year. it’s not weird. it’s not shocking. there’s no Big Reveal. if i were a viewpoint character in fiction, you could show me having nightmares where i was portioned out in plastic-wrapped cuts in a deli case, and it wouldn’t even be exposition, because obviously that specific thing didn’t happen, but just as obviously, the white tile and whirring machines in the deli shop have a distinctly medical flavor, and the theme of being cut up and helpless isn’t exactly hidden.
so why would you show protagonist-me having this dream at all? what’s the point if his medical phobia isn’t the key to some clever plot twist?
well, there’s the fact that this is a really common thing a lot of people deal with, and you can illustrate the character’s personality and motivations really well by showing him reacting to stress. how does he deal when he wakes up? does he cry? does he gruffly tell himself it’s just a dream and try to go back to sleep? does he wake up his spouse for cuddles? what i usually do is turn on some lights, get a cup of tea or a soda, and read a fanfic. this tells you i’m a self-sufficient sort of person but i don’t try to pretend i’m not affected. that’s valuable information to impart about your main character.
my older ptsd comes from emotional abuse in grade school, and while that’s not a secret either, i don’t talk about it as much. you could theoretically make a reveal/twist out of it. but again, that’s a very common situation a lot of people have dealt with, and it seems kind of shitty to write about it like it’s so outlandish no one would ever guess it might’ve happened. if protag!me has dreams about being stuffed in a trash can and forced to eat crayons, half your readers will instantly guess that school wasn’t much fun for him. they get it; it wasn’t much fun for them either.
this has been pretty rambly, sorry for my incoherence. i’m on a lot of painkillers rn. i guess what i’m trying to say is, making ptsd into a Shocking Twist Big Reveal is othering, it’s kinda cheap, and it’s not as surprising as you think it is.
It just didn’t say because Harry is very unobservant.
Dude, not even. Someone did a tally of how many times Harry comments on the attractiveness of a male character (Tom Riddle and Cedric mostly) vs. Ginny or Cho, his purported love interests. It’s not even close. He’s very observant. I’ll put money on “Harry grew up in a bigoted household and legit doesn’t have vocabulary for what his emotions keep doing when he sees pretty boys.”
“Well whatever it was it’s gone now” YOU JUST SEALED YOUR FATE FRIEND.
In anime these are generally reffered to as death flags. As in a sign of death approaching. One of my favorites is. “ I’ve gotta confess my feelings to a girl back home.” This one is special because it’s the almost got away after a bloody battle only to be killed by a anime you thought to be dead.
i love that harry goes to the owlery to hang out with hedwig… the boy is so sweet? owls don’t really seem to be treated like pets by wizarding society as a whole - they don’t live in the dorms like cats / rats / toads do, etc - and so like its just. hjp hangs out with his wizard email address because he is a sweet and gentle boy.
Writers: Bad people are still people with their own problems and emotions, even when they cause problems and distress and hurt other people.
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Writers: Good people are still human beings with their own problems and emotions; even a good person will cause problems and distress and hurt other people.
Bilingual culture is having an academic vocabulary in the exact same language in which you can’t remember the names of any fruits or household appliances.
